- I showed that i had put "consideration and creativity into my presentation from the outset"
- By arranging the seats in the form of a greek theater and using the audience to "make references to the rules and hierarchy of people in greek society" showed I had reseached seating plans and made the information I got my own.
- She said that this was a good link to the social class of ancient Greek theatre. and that it was "important for your classical text and roles with appropriate links, and in a very easily accessible way that held your audiences interest."
- it was good that i didnt just rely on the content of your power point slides.
- I offered good explanations about magic as a background to 'A midsummers nights dream'.
What I need to be carefull about when it comes to the facts -
- when discussing your monologue and Lysistrata as a text - the monologue is not called 'a chorus of women' it has no individual title, but was wrutten to be performed by 'a chorus of women', but siad she understood what I was trying to say and i needed to make it clearer.
"I will be performing a monologue from a Greek play called 'Lysistrata' this is normaly performed by a chorus of women but I will be performing it alone because I think it has much more power in the words spoken if it is performed by one person".
- "This would lead you into discussing the use of chorus in performances and your information anout influances of Thespis the development on performance styles."
- I need to make more links to different acting roles in greek plays and have historical, cultiral and religious backgrand. E.G playwritgh festivals and compatitions.
- doing this will give a clear link to greek god and their influences on classical texts.
- "dont rely on my note cards so much and complacated words like "Diazomata" dirupted the flow of your presentation" this was because i couldn't most of the complacated words.
- Mention more the political side to greece and especialy the link between wars and 'Lysistrata' as this is a central theme of the text.
- I need to make sure the presentation doesn't go on for to long.
- The midsummer nights dream didnt show the same level of insight into the background of the text.
- I need to say what was going on in england culturally, politically, historically, religiously and economically during the 1500's to the same level of the information i resurched for greek history.
- Even though I explained the magical scenes very well but i need to explain further.
- I have to think about how different classes would relate to the different characters. For example the dukes of the play in midsummer nights dream would relate to the uper class and 'bottom' would relate to the groundlings (the lower class people of england).